to Kaoutar, Didimo, Sara and Karen

 Your work is accurate. There are just two errors. "She lived in New York" should be "She has lived in New York." The word "come" should be past tense "came."

 

 

Kaoutar,Didimo,Sara,Karen

 Sara studied five hours yesterday.  She studies five days a week. She lived in New York for seven months.  She had never lived away from Mom and Dad before she come to New York .  She intends to be a
 nurse in the future. She is going to take a vacation in Algeria this summer. He would like to have a useful life with her husband in the future.