Shengquan
Hello:
I am in American, I need to learn English for exchanging with others people
I like reading and I like to read newspaper and something about entertainment and interesting story.
I want to be people who good at speaking English and travel around the world.
I was a student before arrival here.
I am in American, I need to learn English for exchanging with others people
I like reading and I like to read newspaper and something about entertainment and interesting story.
I want to be people who good at speaking English and travel around the world.
I was a student before arrival here.
posted by the blog at 1:12 AM
3 Comments:
Shengquan,
This is your corrected message:
I am in America, so I need to learn English for exchanging ideas with others people.
I like reading and I like to read newspapers and something about entertainment and interesting stories.
I want to be a person who is good at speaking English and travel around the world.
I was a student before my arrival here.
another correction:
In the sentence "I like reading and I like to read newspapers," there should be a comma (,) between "reading" and "and" because there is a new subject "I" after "and."
Welcome to the class, Shengquan. What countries do you want to travel to?
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