Daniela
1.Hello, I'm study here because, i should learn very good english for
to go in the college on september or january.
2.I read only Manga-Anime, Comics and Books very gothics
3.Yes, i like read.
4.My future plans is study very hard and so get music rockstar.
5.behind i come to usa, i finish the high school on colombia.
2.I read only Manga-Anime, Comics and Books very gothics
3.Yes, i like read.
4.My future plans is study very hard and so get music rockstar.
5.behind i come to usa, i finish the high school on colombia.
posted by the blog at 5:24 PM
2 Comments:
Daniela,
This is a corrected version of your message:
1.Hello, I'm studying here because, I should learn very good English in order to go in the college in September or January.
2.I read only Manga-Anime, Comics and books that are very gothic.
3.Yes, I like to read.
4.My future plan is to study very hard and then become a rock star.
5.Before i came to the U.S.A., I finished high school in Colombia.
correcting my correction:
1. There is no commma (,) after "because."
2. Manga-Anime, Comics should be lower case (manga-anime, comics).
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