oscar alvarez
good things happened in 2010
i went to Florida with my family
i found a new jab
good things that have already in 2011
- i have bought a new car
_i have lived in queens since January
things that will happen in 2011
-i will go to Colombia in the summer
-i will get a nice puppy for my wife
i went to Florida with my family
i found a new jab
good things that have already in 2011
- i have bought a new car
_i have lived in queens since January
things that will happen in 2011
-i will go to Colombia in the summer
-i will get a nice puppy for my wife
posted by the blog at 2:26 PM
1 Comments:
Oscar,
There are only two mistakes.
1. You should start sentences with a capital letter and end them with a period (.)
2. The correct spelling is "job."
Everything else is fine. Good writing!
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