Saturday, February 05, 2011

estela

I found a good job,and my father came to New York.
My brother visited my family and I eaten more healty food.

I will take a vacation for one month and my dauthers became happy.

1 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Estela,

Your past sentences and future sentences are correct, but in the middle the present perfect (have/has+ past participle) are not.

Correction: In 2011 my brother has visited my family and I have eaten more healthy food.

Also, in your future sentence, the correct form at the end is: My daughters will become happy.

Sun Feb 06, 02:24:00 AM  

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