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Yuko Namiki
My life in Japan and my life in New York have differed in terms of emotional condition.Wereas my emotional condition was calmed and stable,my emotional condition in New york has been unstable.In japan, I neither lived alone nor had any responsibilities.In addition
I was supported my family.In point of fact, my emotional condition was relaxed and I felt like depended on my parent and
In New York I both rent an apartment with my room mates ourselves and have a lot of responsibilities for everything aspect of how I
live .In addition I don't have time to be lazy,althougth I sometimes want to be like just stay home all day ,especialy rainy day.Indeed ,I stand on myself.
My life in Japan and my life in New York have differed in terms of emotional condition.Wereas my emotional condition was calmed and stable,my emotional condition in New york has been unstable.In japan, I neither lived alone nor had any responsibilities.In addition
I was supported my family.In point of fact, my emotional condition was relaxed and I felt like depended on my parent and
In New York I both rent an apartment with my room mates ourselves and have a lot of responsibilities for everything aspect of how I
live .In addition I don't have time to be lazy,althougth I sometimes want to be like just stay home all day ,especialy rainy day.Indeed ,I stand on myself.
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My life in Japan and my life in New York have differed in terms of emotional condition.Wereas my emotional condition was calmed and stable,my emotional condition in New york has been unstable.In japan, I neither lived alone nor had any responsibilities.In addition
I was supported my family.In point of fact, my emotional condition was relaxed and I felt like depended on my parent and
Yuko, here is yout paragraph with corrections
In New York I both rent an apartment with my room mates by ourselves and have a lot of responsibilities for every aspect of how I live.In addition, I don't have time to be lazy,although I sometimes want to just stay home all day ,especially on rainy days.Indeed,I stand on my own.
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