comments on Gil Ju's Post

 Gil Ju,

Thanks for posting this summary of the article. The main ideas are correct. There are some errors in the grammar. Most are about PREPOSITIONS (in, on, of, from, by etc.) I've made some comments below.


This article was written to school data compliled during two students a they daydreaming . The people spend too much time thinking about they daydreames. which don't be come reality .
it is important to image what i will be in the future .


The article was written FROM schoo data compiled ABOUT students daydreaming. People spend too much time thinking about THEIR daydreams, which don't become reality. It is important to imagine what I will be in the future.

There were only 3 grammar errors. The others were spelling ("compiled" and "daydreamers").