The project about my partner: Patricio
Patricio works six days a week. His job is in the NYC Property Care, LLC he is a constructor. He has been working there for 9 Years. Next year he iscertainly going to stay in New York. Before he moved to New York, he hadlived in Ecuador. In the future he wants to become the owner of his business. He wants to practice his English and plans to go to College. He wants to beco-me an architect because he wants to build buildings in New York and provide jobs for many people. By Flavio.
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Flavio,
Your composition about your classmate Patricio is appreciated and well-written. Patricio's ambitions are large, and that's great. Next week we'll have a visitor to class who will talk and answer questions about going to college. I think you will both get some useful information.
This is the correction of your writing about Patricio (in fact, there were only some small punctuation errors. Everything else is correct:
Patricio works six days a week. His job is in the NYC Property Care, LLC. He is a constructor. He has been working there for 9 Years. Next year he is certainly going to stay in New York. Before he moved to New York, he had lived in Ecuador. In the future he wants to become the owner of his business. He wants to practice his English and plans to go to College. He wants to become an architect because he wants to build buildings in New York and provide jobs for many people.
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