Friday, June 04, 2010

T H E B I R D S

There were two birds in the living room of the small apartment. The man and wife who lived in the apartment didn´t know where the birds came from or how they got in the apartment. They where flying in circles. One was blue with a white crest and the other was dark brown with a light brown stomach. The husband and wife wanted to eat their dinner but they couldn´t whit the two birds flying in the living room. They wanted the birds get out but they couldn´t catch them. The wife suggested to the husband that he call 911. He said that wasn´t necessary. He was very hungry and suggested they eat the birds.

By Oliva

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Oliva, there are only two minor errors here.

1. spelling ("with" not "whit"- I think you just typed it that way by mistake).

2. They wanted the birds TO get out.

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