Comparison and Equivalence by Ivan X.
Corruption Rank for : Colombia 75, United States 19, and Japan 17.
1. Colombia is more corrupt than United States, but it isn't as corrupt as Japan.
2. There is more corruption in Colombia, than in United States, but there isn't as much corruption in Japan as in Colombia.
Corruption Rank for: Ecuador 146, Puerto Rico 35, and Iceland 8.
3. Ecuador is more corrupt than Puerto Rico, but it isn't as corrupt as Iceland.
4. There is more corruption in Ecuador, than in Puerto Rico, but there isn't as much corruption in Iceland as in Ecuador.
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Ivan, these are the corrections of your sentences of comparison and equivalence:
Corruption Rank for : Colombia 75, United States 19, and Japan 17.
1. Colombia is more corrupt than United States, but it isn't as corrupt as Japan. CORRECT
2. There is more corruption in Colombia, than in United States, but there isn't as much corruption in Japan as in Colombia. CORRECT
Corruption Rank for: Ecuador 146, Puerto Rico 35, and Iceland 8.
3. Ecuador is more corrupt than Puerto Rico, but it isn't as corrupt as Iceland. CORRECT
4. There is more corruption in Ecuador, than in Puerto Rico, but there isn't as much corruption in Iceland as in Ecuador. CORRECT (but there should be no comma (,) between "Ecuador" and "than."
1. Colombia is more corrupt than United States, but it isn't as corrupt as Japan.
2. There is more corruption in Colombia, than in United States, but there isn't as much corruption in Japan as in Colombia.
Corruption Rank for: Ecuador 146, Puerto Rico 35, and Iceland 8.
3. Ecuador is more corrupt than Puerto Rico, but it isn't as corrupt as Iceland.
4. There is more corruption in Ecuador, than in Puerto Rico, but there isn't as much corruption in Iceland as in Ecuador.
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Ivan, these are the corrections of your sentences of comparison and equivalence:
Corruption Rank for : Colombia 75, United States 19, and Japan 17.
1. Colombia is more corrupt than United States, but it isn't as corrupt as Japan. CORRECT
2. There is more corruption in Colombia, than in United States, but there isn't as much corruption in Japan as in Colombia. CORRECT
Corruption Rank for: Ecuador 146, Puerto Rico 35, and Iceland 8.
3. Ecuador is more corrupt than Puerto Rico, but it isn't as corrupt as Iceland. CORRECT
4. There is more corruption in Ecuador, than in Puerto Rico, but there isn't as much corruption in Iceland as in Ecuador. CORRECT (but there should be no comma (,) between "Ecuador" and "than."
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