Friday, June 04, 2010

Geovanna Morales - Story in past tense

People were watching a movie in Central. It was night and there were stars in the sky. Some people thought the stars were more interesting than the movie and they looked up. Other people thought the movie is boring and they began to talk. "Please be quiet," someone said. "But the movie was not interesting," the man said. "It may not be interesting to you, but it was very interesting to me," the first man said. The two men became very angry and began to shout. Then nobody could hear the movie. Then it began to rain. Somebody asked for his money back but then remembered that the movie was free. He wanted to complain but there was nobody to complain to. The movie was controlled by a computer, not a person. Then he woke up and realized he was only dreaming. He was in his bed. He looked out the window at a sky full of stars.

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Geovanna, there is only one error. I think it was not really an error but an oversight:

-movie was not interesting.

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