general and support_Mexico & Korea _Sera

*unemployment rate: Mexico - 3.7% , Korea - 33%

-There isn't as high an unemployment rate in Mexico as in Korea.
-The unemployment rate of Maxico is 3.7%.In contrast, that of Korea is 33%.

*literacy rate: Mexico - 91% , Korea - 98%

-There isn't as high a literacy rate in Mexico as in Korea.
-While the literacy rate of Korea is 98%, that of Mexico is 91%.


*population: Mexico - 111,211,789 , Korea - 48,508,972

-There isn't as large a population in Korea as in Mexico.
-The population of Mexico is 111,211,789 and that of Korea is 48,508,972.


*arable land : Mexico - 13% , Korea - 17%

-There isn't as high an arable land in Mexico as in Korea.
-The arable land of Maxico is 13%.In contrast, that of Korea is 17%.


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Sera, this is the correction of your generalizations and supporting sentences:

-There isn't as high an unemployment rate in Mexico as in Korea. CORRECT
-The unemployment rate of Maxico is 3.7%.In contrast, that of Korea is 33%. CORRECT

*literacy rate: Mexico - 91% , Korea - 98%

-There isn't as high a literacy rate in Mexico as in Korea. CORRECT
-While the literacy rate of Korea is 98%, that of Mexico is 91%. CORRECT


*population: Mexico - 111,211,789 , Korea - 48,508,972

-There isn't as large a population in Korea as in Mexico.CORRECT
-The population of Mexico is 111,211,789 and that of Korea is 48,508,972. CORRECT

- A comma before "and" is a good idea.


*arable land : Mexico - 13% , Korea - 17%

-There isn't as high an arable land in Mexico as in Korea.

-AS MUCH ARABLE LAND

-The arable land of Mexico is 13%.In contrast, that of Korea is 17%. CORRECT