Lima and New York

New York is a city bigger than Lima, and has trains that are fast, people don have many problems to go from one city to another. Lima does not have trains as fast as New York that people take much time commuting to get to work using only buses.
In New York people who have a high level of education have more opportunities to get a job and earn more money than people who live in Lima. In Lima People with master degree are not earn as much as People in New York. That is the reason because many people arrive to New York looking for better opportunities to improve professionally and economically.
Even though, New York and Lima are very different, these two cities are visited for many people from different countries. Lima is attracted by tourist to visit historical places and New York is attracted by people dedicated to financial activities.

Martha Benigno

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Martha, again I will write corrections in UPPER CASE letters.

New York is a BIGGER CITY than Lima and has trains that are fast. People don'T have many problems to go from one city to another. Lima does not have trains as fast as New York, SO people take much time commuting to get to work using only buses.

In New York people who have a high level of education have more opportunities to get jobS and earn more money than people who live in Lima. In Lima people with master degree DO not earn as much as people in New York. That is the reason THAT many people arrive IN New York looking for better opportunities to improve professionally and economically.

Even though New York and Lima are very different, these two cities are visited BY many people from different countries. TOURISTS ARE attracted by LIMA to visit historical places and PEOPLE dedicated to financial activities ARE attracted TO NEW YORK .