CLAUDIA MONTERO - LEVEL 4
1. None of the people are from Dominican Republic
2. Almost none of the people speak polih
3. Few of the people smoke
4. A few of the people had breakfast this morning
5. Some of the people live in Queens
6. Most of the people are single
7. Almost all of the people have a job
8. All of the people are studing English
Luis is from Argentina, Buenos Aires, He is single and have a son. He have two works in restaurant and gas station. He love Buenos Aires. In two weeks he start a course of bakery. Don't like cook but like bake. He has been 7 years in New York. In the future he is interested in have his own bakery.
2. Almost none of the people speak polih
3. Few of the people smoke
4. A few of the people had breakfast this morning
5. Some of the people live in Queens
6. Most of the people are single
7. Almost all of the people have a job
8. All of the people are studing English
Luis is from Argentina, Buenos Aires, He is single and have a son. He have two works in restaurant and gas station. He love Buenos Aires. In two weeks he start a course of bakery. Don't like cook but like bake. He has been 7 years in New York. In the future he is interested in have his own bakery.
posted by the blog at 3:34 PM
1 Comments:
The only error in the 8 sentences is that you forgot the "y" in "studying."
In the paragraph, you should write "He has two jobs in a restaurant." The important correction is "has" instead of "have."
Also, "He doesn't like cooking but likes baking."
Welcome to class, Claudia.
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