DIANA VILLACRES AND AMANDINE GAUDEFROY

Alfredo is a thirty eight years old neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkinks University. He works for find a treatment of brain cancer.

He arrived in the United States twenty years ago, and his first job was a migrant farmworker. But when he had five years old, he worked with his father, in his gas station.


Alfredo grew up in a small town closed to Mexico. His family was very poor and really affected with the Mexico's economy collapsed.
At eighteen, he was for his first time a teacher and he continued to work as a farmworker, for had money and helped his family.

Alfredo started a English class at a commumity college, where one of his teacher encouraged him to attend the University of California, Berkeley. 


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Alfredo is a thirty eight year old neurosurgeon and professor at Johns Hopkinks University. He works to find a treatment of brain cancer.

He arrived in the United States twenty years ago, and his first job was a migrant farmworker. But when he was five years old, he worked with his father, in his gas station.

Alfredo grew up in a small town closed to Mexico. His family was very poor and really affected when Mexico's economy collapsed (or: affected by the collapse of Mexico's economy). 

At eighteen, he was for his first time a teacher and he continued to work as a farm worker, to have money and help his family.

Alfredo started an English class at a commumity college, where one of his teacher encouraged him to attend the University of California, Berkeley.