C.J..
Claudia is a beautiful girl..she is studying computer cistem..and also she is en la guardia colleg to inprove her english...she works five days a week,She is a self employed in Manhattan ,she has been working for her self for three years ,nex year she is certanly going to stay in NEW YORK.before she moved to New York, she had lived in Texas,In the future,she wants to became a enginiere in computers cistem.en
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From your writing, I see that Claudia will benefit from the lecture next week about how to go to college.
Here is your writing with some corrections. Please take a look:
Claudia is a beautiful girl. She is studying computer systems, and also she is in Laguardia College to improve her English. She works five days a week. She is self employed in Manhattan. She has been working for herself for three years. Next year she is certainly going to stay in New York. Before she moved to New York, she had lived in Texas. In the future,she wants to become an engineer in computer systems.
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