Mamiko-ji hyun park
Ji hyun park's opinion
Ji hyun park think Yuja is more sucssesful because her job is pianist and she really loves the music. It means she could get a job which she really wanted.
Ji hyun park think Yuja is more sucssesful because her job is pianist and she really loves the music. It means she could get a job which she really wanted.
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1 Comments:
Mamiko,
Thank you for your writing. Here are some correction:
-Ji Hyun Park thinks Yuja is more successfulful because...
In fact, that is the only error. You should remember to use capital letters for names and put /S/ at the end of verbs in the present tense 3rd person singular (he, she, it).
Do you agree with Ji Hyun? Maybe Andrei is also successful because he has chosen a difficult challenge.
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