My partner (Ellie and Chanez)
Hello, my name is Diana, I''m from Colombia and today I want to talk about my two partners, their names are Elie and Chanez. Elie is fom South korea and Chanez is from Algeria. Elie wants to go to College and she plants to live here for 5 or 10 years. Chanez is psychologist and she wants to work here, so she needs go to school, she is married and she plans to live here for all life. I think they have many interest in learning.
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Diana, thank you for introducing Elie and Chanez. I've looked at your paragraph and made some changes. Please read this carefully:
Hello, my name is Diana. I''m from Colombia. and today I want to talk about my two partners, whose names are Elie and Chanez. Elie is fom South Korea and Chanez is from Algeria. Elie wants to go to college and she plans to live here for 5 or 10 years. Chanez is a psychologist and she wants to work here, so she needs go to school, she is married and plans to live here for all life. I think they have a lot of interest in learning.
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