my classmate Jinhua
my classmate's name is Jinhua. she is from China. She has been new york for 3 years . She is living with her mother and father. She is enjoying to learn English. Before she studied in a other school for few years after that she changed her school . She so busy girl because she is learning English
in the morning and she works spa place for part time .
in the morning and she works spa place for part time .
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This is a copy of your paragraph about Jinhua, with some minor corrections:
My classmate's name is Jinhua. She is from China. She has been in New York for 3 years. She is living with her mother and father. She is enjoying learning English. She studied in another school before for a few years. After that, she changed her school. She is such a busy girl because she learns English in the morning and works at a spa part-time.
That is a busy schedule. We want English study to be fun for Jinhua. Then she will learn quickly and have a lot of energy.
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