Tuesday, September 21, 2010

This is Jeonghwan Choi.

I will introduce my partner, Siwapon Topon. She is from Thailand. She has lived for 2 weeks in New York. She wanted to come in NY to travel. She usually searches informations on the web and watches movies. She want to suffer her life. She had worked part time job in her country before she came in NY. It's company that science company is relative to her major. Her major is chemistry of science. She likes science but she don't like her job. She don't like NY because NY's subway is very dirty and there are a lot of people. The reason to study English her is global language. She sometimes don't understand on the web page.

2 Comments:

Blogger the blog said...

Welcome, Jeonghwan and Siwapon.

Let me make some sentence corrections:

-to come to New York

-before she came to New York.

-It was a science company, related to her major.

-Her reason for studying English is that it is a global language

-she sometimes doesn't understand.

Thu Sep 23, 01:55:00 PM  
Blogger the blog said...

By the way, I'm not sure what you mean by "She wants to suffer her life in New York." "Suffer" is probably the wrong verb. Can you find the right one?

Thu Sep 23, 02:00:00 PM  

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