Katrina-Hyelim
I heard some stories about people who experienced the hurricane Katrina in New Orleans.
The first woman Antoinette Franklin said the hardest thing was live in New Orlean continuation,
because they have many memories with her life. Se moved to houston.
The mentioning is awfully sad.
The first woman Antoinette Franklin said the hardest thing was live in New Orlean continuation,
because they have many memories with her life. Se moved to houston.
The mentioning is awfully sad.
posted by the blog at 3:01 PM
1 Comments:
Hyelim,
Yes, the story was awfully sad. Leaving home is difficult.
Grammar hints:
(The hardest thing was leaving New Orleans)
(many memories of her life)
(The story- or the narrative- is awfully sad)
Your sentences are correct except for those places.
Kevin
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