Story design elements

Remember there are some rules to building a strong story:


In the first paragraph, only write about one thing. Make a picture for the reader. Use color, sound, as you like.

In the first paragraph, don't use the word "I" (or "he" or "she" if the story is not your own.

Write the first paragraph only first and give a print to Kevin. The first paragraph should not be very short.

Don't use these words: nice, beautiful, interesting, wonderful, etc.