Paola and Yang Ry,
It's great that you posted your writing on the blog. I've taken a look at the answers you wrote to the questions about the article on romantic love, and I have made some changes to the sentences. You should take a look and notice the differences from the original version (the one you wrote).
1.The history about romantic love is that Italian Scientist found that a chemical that makes us romantic disappears over a year.
2.The chemical that increases when people fall in love is called Nerve Growth Factor (NGF).
3.Romantic love lasts over a year.
4. 58 volunteers who had recently fallen in love.
5. They compared the NGF levels in people who were single or in steady relationships.
6. The people got sweaty palms when they bought red roses and candlelit dinners.
It's great that you posted your writing on the blog. I've taken a look at the answers you wrote to the questions about the article on romantic love, and I have made some changes to the sentences. You should take a look and notice the differences from the original version (the one you wrote).
1.The history about romantic love is that Italian Scientist found that a chemical that makes us romantic disappears over a year.
2.The chemical that increases when people fall in love is called Nerve Growth Factor (NGF).
3.Romantic love lasts over a year.
4. 58 volunteers who had recently fallen in love.
5. They compared the NGF levels in people who were single or in steady relationships.
6. The people got sweaty palms when they bought red roses and candlelit dinners.
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