Cattle Rustlimg A Deadly Buisness In Sudan
Cattle rustling is serious problem in Sudan where happen many murders.Sudan's government is planning a policy which protect raiding cattle.
Wrote by Marika
Wrote by Marika
posted by the blog at 7:14 PM
2 Comments:
Marika,
Yes, those are the main points, and they raise questions. I wonder how long cattle rustling has been a problem in Sudan and why the government is trying to stop it now.
Cattle rustling is a serious problem in Sudan where many murders happen.Sudan's government is planning a policy which protects against raiding cattle.
Marika,
I see a mistake in my correction of your sentences. I wrote:
Cattle rustling is a serious problem in Sudan where many murders happen.
The correct sentence is:
Cattle rustling is a serious problem in Sudan, where many murders happen.
The comma (,) after Sudan is necessary.
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